tape it toogther.

So, for a class project I cut up my manuscript and stick it back together. By reading it disjointed I picked out quite a bit. But, I also think I got an idea for a rewrite that focuses on the parallels of reality and wrestling. That was kind of my idea from the onset but I really got refocused and I noticed that the accidents that worked were the ones where things went back and forth between Eric talking to Nikki and talking to Mac. I think I want to do a nonlinear story based on modules of Nikki conversations and Mac conversations to emphasis the parallels.  I am not quite sure what else to say